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| 제목 | My business trip 3. | 등록일 | 2025-06-18 |
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| 내용 | Someday If I have a chance , I hope to go on a business trip to New York, London and Paris for my business trip with my co-worker. Thank you for reading my story. (Writing this took about 2 hours. lol! ) See you later! |
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| 담당강사 | HannahP2usa | 등록일 | 2025-06-18 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Hi Juyeong, Great wrap-up! Just some minor notes: - "Someday if I get the chance, I hope to go on a business trip to New York,, London and Paris." I'm so grateful for the effort. I know you said it took you hours to get this done but it really shows how your proficiency in grammar is growing. Keep up the great work! Hannah |
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